Advice from Graduate Admissions Representatives
Director of Admissions and Aid
The University of Chicago Graduate School of Business
The mistake people make most often is not to look at what the questions are asking. Some people prepare generic statements because they’re applying to more than one school and it’s a lot of work to do a personal essay for each school. On the other hand, generic statements detract from the applicant when we realize that we’re one of six schools and the applicant is saying the same thing to each and every school despite the fact that there are critical differences between the kinds of schools they may be applying to. They don’t take the time. They underestimate the kind of attentions that is paid to these essays. Take a look at what the essay asks and deal with those issues articulately and honestly.
At least 2, and sometimes 3, people read each essay. I read them to make the final decision. Our process works so that each person who reads the application does a written evaluation of what he or she has read and the written evaluations are not seen by the other reader.
Director of Admissions and Financial Aid
J. L. Kellogg Graduate School of Management (Northwestern University)
We’re looking for a well-written, detailed essay that responds directly to the question. The questions are about extracurricular activities, motivation, challenges, commitment to the school that kind of thing. We see a variety and that’s fine. Our approach is very individualized. The way the applicant devises the answer, determines the length, develops the response, is all part of the answer. The level of effort applicants put into essays varies considerably, which sends messages to the admissions committee as well. Over-involved, elaborate essays send one message, while very brief and superficial essays send another message.
Trying to second-guess what we are looking for is a common mistake–which we can sense.
We can tell when applicants use answers to other schools’ questions for our essays; we’re sensitive to this. Poorly written essays are a bad reflection on the applicant.
Don’t over-elaborate; we’re reading a lot of these kinds of essays. Also, don’t be too brief or superficial. We like to have major ideas presented well.
Michael D. Rappaport
Assistant Dean of Admissions
UCLA School of Law
Applicants should take the time to look at what the law school is asking them to write about. At UCLA, we say, “we know you have lots of extracurricular activities–we want to know how you differ, what makes you unique? What can you bring to the first year class that’s going to make you distinctive from the other 99 people who are already there?” The fact that you were active in your fraternity or sorority is really not going to do it. What we’re looking for is somebody who, in their personal statement, stands out as being so unusual, so diverse, that they’re extremely attractive as a law student for the first-year class. Maybe what’s going to make them distinctive is the fact they spent six months living in a log cabin in Alaska. You try to give the law school some justification for admitting you. With a lot of people, there’s nothing that’s going to make them distinctive. If that’s the case, they’ve got to recognize that, indeed, the essay is not going to make that much difference here at UCLA.
We’re also asking if there’s any reason their LSAT or grades are not predictive. You’d be amazed at the number of people who completely ignore this–they don’t take advantage of the opportunity.
Most law schools operate fairly similarly. There’s a certain group of applicants whose grades and LSAT scores are so high that the presumption is that the applicants are going to be admitted unless they do something terribly stupid to keep themselves out. I have seen applicants whose personal statement has done that, but it’s extremely rare. At the other extreme is another group of applicants who, no matter what they write, are not going to get in.
The applicant has to realize, first of all, where he or she stands. If you have a straight-A grade point average and a perfect LSAT score, you don’t have to spend a lot of time worrying about your personal statement. On the other hand, if you know you’re in the borderline area, that’s where the personal statement becomes very, very important.
The applicant should take the time to read the application to see what the schools are asking for. Sometimes the school will ask for a general description of why you want to go to law school, or why they should admit you, something of that nature. In such case you can be fairly sure that the school is just interested in the essay to see how well you write. So what you say isn’t as important as how you say it. On the other hand, some schools are more specific–UCLA being a very good example of that.
Make sure the essay is grammatically and technically correct and well written. Avoid sloppy essays, coffee stained essays, or ones that are handwritten so you can’t read them. You’d be amazed at what we get!
Director of Admissions and Financial Aid
University of California at Berkeley School of Law (Boalt Hall)
We’re trying to gauge the potential for a student’s success in law school, and we determine that, principally, on the basis of what the student has done in the past. The personal statement carries the responsibility of presenting the student’s life experiences.
Applicants make a mistake by doing a lot of speculation about what they’re going to do in the future rather than telling us about what they’ve done in the past. It is our job to speculate, and we are experienced at that.
Applicants also tend to state and not evaluate. They give a recitation of their experience but no evaluation of what effect that particular experience head on them, no assessment of what certain experiences or honors meant.
They also fail to explain errors or weaknesses in their background. Even though we might wish to admit a student, sometimes we can’t in view of a weakness that they haven’t made any effort to explain. For example, perhaps they haven’t told us that they were ill on the day that they took the LSAT or had an automobile accident on the way. Such things are legitimate reasons for poor performance. I mean, we understand that life is tough sometimes. We need to know what happened, for example, to cause a sudden drop in the GPA.
Another mistake is that everyone tries to make himself or herself the perfect law school applicant who, of course, does not exist and is not nearly as interesting as a real human being.
Between l and 5 people read each application.
Dr. Daniel R. Alonso
Associate Dean for Admissions
Cornell University Medical College
We look for some originality because nine out of ten essays leave you with a big yawn. “I like science, I like to help people and that’s why I want to be a doctor.” The common, uninteresting, and unoriginal statement is one that recounts the applicant’s academic pursuits and basically repeats what is elsewhere in the application. You look for something different, something that will pique your interest and provide I some very unique insight that will make you pay some l notice to this person who is among so many other qualified applicants. If you’re screening 5,500 applications over a four- or six-month period, you want to see something that’s really interesting.
I would simply say: Do it yourself, be careful, edit it, go through as many drafts as necessary. And more important than anything: be yourself. really show your personality. Tell us why you are unique, why we should admit you. The premise is that 9 out of 10 people who apply to medical school are very qualified. Don’t under any circumstances insert handwritten work or an unfinished piece of writing. Do a professional job. I would consider it a mistake to attempt to cram in too much information, too many words. Use the space as judiciously as possible. Don’t submit additional pages or use only 1/20th of the space provided.
Chairman, Committee on Admissions
Washington University School of Medicine
We are looking for a clear statement that indicates that the applicant can use the English language in a meaningful and effective fashion. We frankly look at spelling as well as typing (for errors both in grammar and composition). Most applicants use the statement to indicate their motivation for medicine, the duration of that motivation, extracurricular activities, and work experience. So those are some of the general things we are looking for in the Personal Comments section.
We also want applicants to personalize the statement, to tell us something about themselves that they think is worthy of sharing with us, something that makes them unique, different, and the type of medical student and future physician that we’re all looking for. What they have done in working with individuals–whether it’s serving as a checker or bagger at a grocery store or working with handicapped individuals or tutoring inner city kids–that shows they can relate to people and have they done it in an effective fashion? What the applicant should do in all respects is to depict why he or she is a unique individual and should be sought after. Of course, if they start every sentence on a whole page with “I,” it gets to be a little bit too much.